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Friday, November 11, 2005

Mist

Love
Cocoons of mist
Slow warm
silent
Late night phonetics
on assembly tongue
Questions – void perusal
Mind sidles
a furlong while
Cogs snap
colliding space
This place this time
There for no more
wait
Soporific clause
melatonin
Indentations
Stop right
Take left
turning corners
Fables – none mine
none yours
Comfort
stretching vision
Fraying limits of illusion
remain
Bottom cup of
old dolmens

3 Comments:

Blogger Shamasis said...

can u please explain: "limits of illusion!"

6:49 pm

 
Blogger Manish "Diogenes" Golder said...

It is only but natural to seek truth and to conform only to it. Or atleast analyse everything wrt it. But then you encounter moments when that definition bottoms out - the illusions with frayed limits - the borderline of logic and reality and dreams.
I am unable to articulate any better.

11:48 pm

 
Blogger Shamasis said...

Illusion starts when you cross that borderline of logic and reality. And beyond that border, there is no limit.

Thus, the very words limits illusion," defies the definition whether taken in rational, irrational, abstract or philosophical sense. And even if we say that the illusion is of an ignorant fool's. Even then, wrt the illusionist it is "limitless."

I have no issues with it. Your verses were amiable. It is only this imagery of "limited illusions" that made feel "irksome."

3:30 am

 

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